The Bachelor Auction

December 19, 2016
The first in Van Dyken’s Bachelors of Arizona series charms readers with a decidedly modern retelling of the Cinderella story. After Jane’s father’s death, she inherited her family’s cleaning business and the care of her two spoiled sisters—which includes bailing them out of debt, cooking for them, and more. Wealthy orphan Brock Wellington has always put the needs of others before his own, so when his scheming grandfather blindsides him with the idea of auctioning himself off for marriage to the highest bidder, Brock feels he can’t say no. After Jane breaks a heel at a Wellington event, Brock solicitously plays the prince. But when Brock’s grandfather hires Jane to clean his late parents’ ranch without telling him, Brock turns into a surly knave. Brock’s extreme pain at being in his childhood home is evident; there are memories in every corner and rituals he can’t unlearn. Van Dyken (The Dare) also deftly portrays Jane’s insecurities and her confusion about Brock’s transformation from charmer to jerk. A lively cast of supporting characters—particularly Brock’s brothers, Bentley and Brant—provide numerous opportunities to chuckle and cheer in this lighthearted, eminently readable treat. Agent: Erica Silverman, Trident Media Group.

The synergy between narrators Douglas Berger and Annie Green highlights the romance and tender humor in this contemporary Cinderella story. The alternating narration brings out the growing attraction between dutiful billionaire bachelor Brock Wellington and Jane--who runs her own cleaning company and is unappreciated and mistreated by her older sisters. As the narrators effectively capture the personalities of the characters, Berger's deeper tones and deliberate pace complement Green's lighter approach. Berger also portrays the loving relationship between Brock and his brothers. Green theatrically conveys Jane's mean sisters, adding a comedic touch to this light and romantic listening experience. M.F. � AudioFile 2016, Portland, Maine